Thursday, October 23, 2008

Chapter 12

Thowan had to do something but there was nothing he could do. Peter possessed by Garth ran on. They got to a river. Peter walked to the middle of the bridge. Peter held the struggling bag over the edge. His fingers slowly uncurled. He let go. The bag dropped.

It hit the water. It sank a good twelve feet under water. The bag quickly filled up. Thowan was panicking. The water soon engulfed him. Bandages swelled and fell off. Thowan paddled with all his might to get the bag up. He had no idea if he was going up or down. He started to need air. His vision blurred. He pasted out.

He woke up. He was still in the bag but on land. Thowan heard a voice.

"I can't believe we found a wolf inside a sack with no mom still alive in the river"

"You need shorter sentences"

"I wonder how much we can get for him" Thowan had been caught by poachers!

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